{"id":53,"date":"2021-04-01T18:36:50","date_gmt":"2021-04-01T23:36:50","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/pages.stolaf.edu\/responses-to-thunberg\/?page_id=53"},"modified":"2021-04-21T11:31:14","modified_gmt":"2021-04-21T16:31:14","slug":"revise","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/pages.stolaf.edu\/responses-to-thunberg\/for-students\/write-like-greta\/revise\/","title":{"rendered":"6. Revise"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Share what you\u2019ve written so far with a classmate. Go through the following steps:<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">Read each other\u2019s paragraphs and <\/span><b>see if you can identify both images\/metaphors and counterarguments<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">. If this is difficult, think about how you could revise to make the strategy more obvious. Maybe you need a stronger image, or to add signaling phrases like \u201cSome people <\/span><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\">think \u2026\u201d<\/span><\/li>\n<li>\u00a0Then, <b>consider if the strategy has been used effectively<\/b><span>: Did the person&#8217;s writing make you feel something about this topic? Did they make you think about the topic in a new way? Did they respond persuasively to a criticism?\u00a0\u00a0<\/span><\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p><b>Is there anything else they can add<\/b><span style=\"font-weight: 400;\"> to improve their writing so far, such as transitions, a concluding sentence, or a more clear initial claim? Remember that you can bring that metaphor back at the end like Greta does, to make your writing more focused.<\/span><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>Next: <a href=\"https:\/\/pages.stolaf.edu\/responses-to-thunberg\/for-students\/write-like-greta\/share-your-writing\/\">Share your writing<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Share what you\u2019ve written so far with a classmate. Go through the following steps: &nbsp; Read each other\u2019s paragraphs and see if you can identify both images\/metaphors and counterarguments. If this is difficult, think about how you could revise to make the strategy more obvious. Maybe you need a stronger image, or to add signaling [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":3796,"featured_media":0,"parent":24,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"footnotes":""},"class_list":["post-53","page","type-page","status-publish","hentry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/pages.stolaf.edu\/responses-to-thunberg\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/53","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/pages.stolaf.edu\/responses-to-thunberg\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/pages.stolaf.edu\/responses-to-thunberg\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pages.stolaf.edu\/responses-to-thunberg\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/3796"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pages.stolaf.edu\/responses-to-thunberg\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=53"}],"version-history":[{"count":5,"href":"https:\/\/pages.stolaf.edu\/responses-to-thunberg\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/53\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":164,"href":"https:\/\/pages.stolaf.edu\/responses-to-thunberg\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/53\/revisions\/164"}],"up":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/pages.stolaf.edu\/responses-to-thunberg\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/24"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/pages.stolaf.edu\/responses-to-thunberg\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=53"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}